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COCK NIGHT

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  ATMOSPHERE The atmosphere is emotionally manipulative, seductive, deceptive, cautionary, and psychologically tense. The poem evokes a sense of emotional uncertainty, where sweet words conceal dangerous intentions. COCK NIGHT He walks one-sided,  like a fish tempted to taste the bait  Dancing like a cock will showcase talent to the hen,  Folding and unfolding its wrapper,  A display for a woman he doesn't love,  The very one he cheats on. "I can not sleep without you"  He's been sleeping.  "You are the cockroach in my cupboard"  Believe me, he only has pots in there.  "You are the sugar in my tea"  He only takes pure Lipton, ordinary Lipton.  "I will die for you"  Let him smell the barrel of the body freeze  And he will behave like Peter,  Waiting for the cock to crow thrice.  "I love you more than my mothers"  He's dependent like a parasite.  "You are the most beautiful girl I've ever seen" ...

THE DAYS OF SPARROW

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ATMOSPHERE The atmosphere is tense, dark, chaotic, manipulative, and emotionally disturbing. The poem creates a fearful political environment filled with betrayal, desperation, greed, violence, and hidden danger. THE DAYS OF SPARROW Man is the best when men behold him afar.  The closer he comes,  The monster he becomes.  Take a look at his manifesto  And gossip to us what he's up to  Give him power and wed fear. My political participation is base on, "well".  Like I would build my hut on the East West Bridge.  Of course I know they are lovers of Bridge  They show you their card  And you do nothing than run mad  They can't serve you well. My friends, take! Take!! Take!!!  That money is borrowed somewhere, When he wins the throne, you shall see the tear.  Never risk your life to give him throne,  He can offer nothing except bone,  And mistakes shall be all the steps you take. Woe is almost all they do.  Take from t...

THE UNQUALIFIED ADVISOR

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  ATMOSPHERE A serious and thought-provoking atmosphere filled with moral contradiction, hypocrisy, disappointment, and hidden truth. The poem creates a tense emotional environment where words and actions stand in conflict. THE UNQUALIFIED ADVISOR If only married men were advised  And had stuck to the advice  The way they would wish the youth to,  Then Christendom would be full of Monogamists But it's a pity  That he who pleases the eye  Is more of Don Juan  Than we had ever imagined. Sometimes I look at my adviser  And then I read the mind of the blind.  The blind knows he need advice than I (a Single) do  What a confused soul! Let him who is far from truth take advice,  And he who is close examines himself.  One could be a prey at times,  Everyone knows you can't give what you lack. “Everyone knows you can't give what you lack.” AUTHOR’S NOTE The Unqualified Advisor was inspired by the growing culture of hypocrisy in soc...

THE BIG “F”

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ATMOSPHERE   A reflective and philosophical atmosphere filled with emotional truths, relationship realities, social expectations, family values, and human behavior. The poem navigates a range of emotions, from caution and humor to advice and hard truths about marriage, friendship, and family life. THE BIG "F"                     See her the way the world does,                      And she will grow old at the right time.  But see her in another dimension  And she will be growing till you both die at 70.                     Let your eyes behold all women,                      And you will never marry.  But let her alone be your flamingo  And her color will be unique.                     A man shall leave his...

THE CRITICISM

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  ATMOSPHERE A reflective and philosophical atmosphere filled with beauty, pride, comparison, and emotional awakening. The poem gradually shifts from admiration to correction, exposing human arrogance and reminding readers of the equality hidden beneath appearance. THE CRITICISM This world is a savannah  That gives life to only the daffodil.  Wales loves her, and guys cherish her.  They admire the blooming petals  which pops out of her natural attire.  God did adorn her  with worth of sparkling shore pebbles  which diamonize the Pacific shore. This world is a stream  That gives joy to only the lily.  How joyful she is to duel in the land  where nature nurtures just one creature.  She smiles all day long.  Everything is sufficient unto her- the water, the sunlight.  She uses them at will. This world is a rural backyard.  The only plant grown is a vegetable A high-yielding pepper plant.  Every leftover residue...